Lady of Fire

Chapter 2: Ceremonies The forest was quiet as leaves crackled under horse hooves. A small doe hung limp from the prince’s saddle as two large bucks hung over the knight’s. ...

ok, i fixed the king some and i added that they were in the stables. im still alittle bit iffy to change the discription of Trygg though. When i discribe ...

Thank you all for the reviews. As of this chapter, the main characters have not been intorduced. Hannah and James are important characters but they are not the main characters. ...

Thank you all for the critique, its really helpful. The story has been updated and i hope to get more adivce. Few things to certain individuals: Night Mistress: You find ...

Chapter 1: Orders The prince of Weldon looked down at the small village from his high tower window, his breath steaming up the glass. He ran a hand through his ...

its very well written and u leave it at a very well written clifhanger. that gives u room to continue Emma's entry or you could write the entry from Casey's ...

ok, story has been edited and i would like to thank aloe for giving me all of those good tips. and about ur last comment aloe, who said anything about ...

Prologue: The rain fell against the roof tops. It fell with a rhythm of a beating drum or a quickened heart beat. For the man on the forest floor, the ...

*blink* *blink* this...was...AWSOME!!! this is soo good!! no not good AWSOME!!! the way you merged the prolouge and the first chapter together was great. the only thing i have to ...

thanks. the reason, i think, it sounds like this is because when i envision the scene, i see it like a movie and discribe it like that. to me discribing ...

actually, i did mention it. Thainnahindu Wellmu Gwelu was a squire under his father, Sir. Mounlyei Ena Gwelu of the Burning Star, Ceifene. I didn't expand on it but I ...

ok, i fixed chapter 2 so everyone can read it now. just for ANOUTHER update. ^-^

Ok, I posted this before but for some reason, it didn't show up. So, here I go, trying again. _______________________________________________________________________ {Chapter 2} Iswin skillfully “fe

woah, that was unexpected. a tragic romance and one like i have never read before. i wonder if he knew he was going to die and that is why he ...

wow, i got shivers down my spine. this was soo good. i don't care how long ago it was posted, if it can send sivers up and down the spine ...